First of all, this story is very good not going to lie, I like the descriptive writing since it makes the reader get an image transmit in his mind, and it feels like I am in there. Interesting plot, not saying that this betrayed god hasn't been portrayed before in modern, but I am just saying that your way of portraying this is unique, and it has kind of different take. Now we mix these two things we kind of get a full-blown masterpiece with enormous potentiality and third of all the pacing doesn't feel rushed. Hope to see more author
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