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Review Detail of ReaperDZero in The Absolute One (Genshin&multiverse)

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The quality is pretty good for a first time author, the updating stab is something to be improved upon for sure but I would rather have sporadic updates then a dropping of the story. It has good potential, main character isn’t an idiot, he is fleshed out and has a personality beyond of just amassing power and grabbing any girl he wants. He is cold, methodical, ruthless, coupled with compassion for children. Reminds me of Aizen without the world-ending ambition and a slight care for other human beings. It is a unique start by telling us the ending, which in my opinion is kind of killing the story a little because of the knowledge that no matter what happens, he’s going to survive. However, who knows maybe the author can pull it off to be something interesting. There haven’t been enough side characters to say that they have been fleshed out well. But with the few characters that have come on and had a dialogue, they seem like real people and not NPC’s. Romance: There hasn’t been a mentioning of a girl character without it being from using them in a plan yet. The author did say that he has around 3 girls in mind from genshin, which I find momentously weird because of how large the verse is and the fact that it’s still expanding. However, I understand that the more girls there are, the less real the romance can become. It can also become a testament to the authors writing ability if he can pull it off well. Overall, I like it. Keep up the good work and don’t suffer the author illness of making the main character a complete idiot and make them do something completely out of character for plot after 20 chapters

The Absolute One (Genshin&multiverse)

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That’s pretty fair. I definitely agree with the update stability and romance part. I need to improve on that and the romance is going to be tough to get down but again 3 girls is just a guideline and not a hard limit. Also the first chapter is not the final ending I would put it more as one of the final arcs