Review Detail of Nixie_doll in The Son Of The Demon

So far, so good. The book is alright in my opinion and the first chapter is quite captivating. Although there's one thing I'd like to inform you about. In the first chapter, I noticed you mentioning the name of the girl 'Ari' alot. We know it's her cause she's the main target here, so you don't need to say Ari all the time. Sometimes, use 'She' instead. The readers will know that it's her that you're referring too. ❤️