Review Detail of onedaysomedayy in Dragon Ball FM: Rebirth Into a New Life

This is the first fanfic I've read on webnovel and I have to admit I’m very impressed! The grammar is great, very detailed, and paced well. The character dynamics flow naturally and the story is unique on its own! Overall, I enjoyed the concept of the story and see great potential from the author. Great job! I will add that author might want to consider adding TWs to avoid upsetting potential readers on sensitive matters (violence, blood, etc).