Review Detail of TreacherousVoid in A Prince of House Targaryen

What a snooze fest. 4 chapters just to introduce the Mc, and another 10 spent on nothing but Catlyn hating on Jon and us watching him cry There’s been no plot or progress from what I’ve seen, and to top it all off the author decides to make John talk to the three eyed raven and sheet. I want the 1-2hrs of my life I spent reading this back. OR you can tell me when your story starts.