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I'd have to say this is one of the better WebNovels I have read. I am yet to finish it, but the grammar is terrible. It can make it hard to understand what's going on and some things seem far too convenient, for example, you meet a strange talking cat that calls you a pain in the ass and then asks you to be family and live with it? No hesitation brother. I dread WebNovels because so many of them seem like blatant copy and paste, not to mention I don't particularly care for cultivation novels. So far, the actual story is good, the characters are likable and the world is pretty good too. I enjoy it. Not wrong in any regard other than grammar. If the grammar were to improve, I wouldn't hesitate to give this a better rating.

Alchemist and the Alderan Academy

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Thank you for being honest. I will try to improve it later. I hope you will enjoy the rest of it :)