Compared to the last 3 stories you have done this is my least favorite. It feels like I jumped in the middle of a TV series becuase of the past lives he already had. Then those women and his kids/grandkids arrive and are basically thrown in his life and we don't even really get a how they met. Part of me honestly hopes you'll drop it and continue the last three works you did or something else.
ManOfCultureLeon
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