A solid 4.2 from my end. The the power of the mc in itself is very interesting. The villain part piqued my interest in this story. I hope you don't ruin it with harem, (I've seen many novels be destroyed by such). [This is a genuine review from me] The writing quality is good considering English is the author's 3rd language. There are some mistakes here and there but nothing that will break the immersion. 4/5 Not much to be seen about the plot in the earlier chaps but it gets interesting enough. (might seem cliche to some) 4/5 The mc's character is great considering his villain side. The author has tried to display him as smart but needs a little more depth. 4/5 The updating stability has been good as far as I am concerned. 5/5 The world background is a little overused, the gate appearing theme which has been used a lot on this site (same as solo leveling). So to some readers it might seem boring but it is changed here and there, so it is acceptable. (4/5) Overall a great read to invest your time in and an awesome work by the author considering it is his first book. Hope you keep improving and keep writing. Goodluck.
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SUKAAFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...
Thank God! I actually hate harem and don't prefer romance either, so if you don't plan to include any that would be awesome.
AFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...
AFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...
AFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...
AFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...
AFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...
AFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...
AFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...
understandable you don't want harem. many authors so ruin their novels with it. In my bio all I have to say is my hatred for harem. Yet recently, I read two novels where the woman weren't entirely braindead. I think one is called "my life simulator system" which I'm now addicted too and the other is "Vampire night life" which is more braindead but not like most and I like Vampires
it really does though,a want a true villain.Not a simp."help I'm being attacked" them four words are sign it's being ruined in cultivation novels
tortle:nah man a little bit of romance doesn't hurt, I dont care if it comes later on. (200+)
AFM31_ALDA:Thanks for your honest review! Actually, I don't plan to include a harem or romance in this story. I don't want to make my MC a simp...