Review Detail of DaddyCarvz in I…MIGHT BE GREEDY

Shameless Author here.... I am not a Native Speaker so please don't be to harsh with roasting me because of grammar error. If there are any mistakes please let me know I will try to correct them right away. This will be my first time writing so I don't really have a target but I just really want to try writing and hopefully I can improve as time goes on. Thank you in advance for trying out my work.