Review Detail of funkiller_562 in PATCHED SOUL

Synopsis, perfect ten💯 It would totally pull readers the check out what "patched soul" has in store for them. Descriptions were great so the world background easily came together in my mind. The paragraphs were too long and that discouraged me a little bit. If you must write a long paragraph, let it be between 6-9 lines, no more, especially for ML novels. Character development can be elaborated. Some things were put together all at once. Take your time, the book's not ending right away and try to mold the MC's characteristics into his body language and actions.