the pacing is absolute hot garbage. the fight scenes have barely any description which ties into the pacing. system stats need a little explanation. alot of another nitpicks that just make it unenjoyable to read
Toist_New_Moon
Disukai oleh 3 orang
SUKAToist_New_Moon:yeah, because I want to make this novel as something I would do if I ever where to get some busted ability and go to RWBY, and the pacing is supposed to be fast in before the story. And ok +bread 👍🍞
Toist_New_Moon:yeah, because I want to make this novel as something I would do if I ever where to get some busted ability and go to RWBY, and the pacing is supposed to be fast in before the story. And ok +bread 👍🍞