Review Detail of FavourEkele_1969 in Justice And Desire

Grammar's decent. Progression's a bit slow. The tension's a little overwhelming. IMHO, the FL is overbearing as h*ll. But she is a bit relatable. The male lead has guts, appeal and stuff. I understand this is a cop novel but I don't really enjoy excessive vulgarity. The character POV's a turnoff but I understand it does capture the attention of readers' that it's looking for. just work on making them less annoying. I really hope the story thrives beyond author's expectations.