Review Detail of VamPyr00 in Tanya in Overlord
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Great job with the story so far. Background info for the MC is very interesting to me, as a fan of Youjo Senki. The biggest issue with this story at the moment is simply the lack of story development, but pacing seems good so I don't think it will be a problem once more chapters are posted. Chapters are a bit heavy on info but honestly, that is to be expected at the beginning of an Overlord fanfic starting within YGGDRASIL. Overall, I believe the story is coming along nicely. I will be sure to post a more conclusive review once there are more chapters posted. ... ... ...
Tanya in Overlord
John_Ryan_8278
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It is indeed quite a large task, I have tried to write a few myself but none were up to my standards. Anyways, I think you are doing great so keep up the good work. I look forward to more chapters. XD
John_Ryan_8278:Jesus I underestimated how hard a overlord fic actually was but i can assure you things should actually get more story than info dumps soon
VamPyr00:It is indeed quite a large task, I have tried to write a few myself but none were up to my standards. Anyways, I think you are doing great so keep up the good work. I look forward to more chapters. XD
Don't worry about it! Take your time and get it exactly how you want it. It is worth the wait for us readers! XD
John_Ryan_8278:sorry I'm taking a while this chapter is the longest so far