Review Detail of SquirrelFlyTree in Goddess of Ice: Corrupting Bleach

I loved the first novel that Maerry wrote, and this one is a masterpiece as well. Though, I spotted more spelling mistakes than the first and less character development, along with the novel losing its "soul" early on, making me unable to read more like VeganMaster's "One Piece: Reborn as Enel." who's "soul" was lost when a limb was lost. Great novel but it has a bit too many cliches from the first book and average in the entertainment score but good for passing time.