Review Detail of lucifurge in Absolute Transcendent: Dimension Traverse

Very good story and interesting mc, oh and nice plot, but the way you pov people is hard to read, so try changing it. Sorry, but I am not gotta giving five cause it has disappointed me after two chapters. Much sorry, it was exciting at first, but then I lost interest it's so hard to read cant point were is the mc or the others characters I can point them when they say their names or they talk with how they were set to speak so far, you can improve so keep up the good work