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Review Detail of Dimas_Pratama in GIGOLO GAME (EN)

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Dimas_Pratama
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I never thought that a gigolo played VRMMO before. never expect that. The story was interesting though character design needs to improvement. Especially description. For World background, i think was good explaination. I hope that you need to consider about character design and how to make each character. I recommended this story for the reader, who loves the unique protagonist

GIGOLO GAME (EN)

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I feel good to be reviewed by someone who is an expert in this genre. Moreover, input about the character is very helpful, in the future I will strengthen it again. Thank you