Review Detail of GodOfLight in The Undefeatable (Male Reader x DC/Marvel Harem

Item: The Undefeatable (Male Reader x DC/Marvel Harem
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GodOfLightLv14mthGodOfLight

What can I tell you, the story goes from bad to worse, the interactions are forced, they don't seem natural at all and the story goes downhill and also the main character is a cuckold

The Undefeatable (Male Reader x DC/Marvel Harem

SirZurone

Disukai oleh 1 orang

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SirZuronePenulisSirZurone

Haha lol I guess it is pretty crap it's my first story and I haven't touched it other than when I have been incredibly bored. But I agree all the characters are out of character and I didn't know now to make a likable character

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