I'm really glad you posted your story here because it's been an awesome read so far! I particularly liked how similar this feels from the original, while also adding to the world building and cast. I have only one concern for this story: with Ainz being different from the series the story has lost the motive of him struggling to keep up with those around him and now that he is even more powerful I fear there would be no struggle moving forward and that would be unexciting. Still; thanks again for sharing your story. I'm eager for more
BoombaTheSaint
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SUKAHey thanks for the review. It isn’t as straightforward as you think it is. I mean, yea, Ainz has power but he’s also a ruler. He won’t be on the forefront of every battle. He will have confrontations but even those won’t be as simple as stumping his lessers or else this would be a dull predictable story. I can’t say much since I fear ruining/ spoiling the mystery but challenges will arise.
BoombaTheSaint:Hey thanks for the review. It isn’t as straightforward as you think it is. I mean, yea, Ainz has power but he’s also a ruler. He won’t be on the forefront of every battle. He will have confrontations but even those won’t be as simple as stumping his lessers or else this would be a dull predictable story. I can’t say much since I fear ruining/ spoiling the mystery but challenges will arise.