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Sks_Nightfox
Sks_NightfoxLv141yrSks_Nightfox

Bad grammar I can deal with. The problem here is no punctuation marks indicating a pause between parts of a sentence. Keep writing but my suggestion is to get an editor and/or proofreader.

The change in History and Present

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ATOMIC_MOON
ATOMIC_MOONPenulisATOMIC_MOON

thank you for your advise i am working on ot

Sks_Nightfox
Sks_NightfoxLv14Sks_Nightfox

sure I'll try it out.

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