Review Detail of SaltedEgg in I Spread The Pokemon All Over The World
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The story is good, but the racism and patriotism destroy everything, maybe you need to skip or rewrite some chapter, especially about Zygarde and Yveltal attacks to other countries (the usual Chinese vibe). At least, make them fell sad about what happened. felling happy about the destruction of a city in another country is inhumanand and unacceptable, even though they hate that country. Aside from that, the story is acceptable.
I Spread The Pokemon All Over The World
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Around ch 202 and ch 352. In ch 202, mc ask Zygarde to punished some poachers from "stick country" and destroy a City. In ch 352, Yveltal wakes up in "Island Country", Mc "accidentally" drop Yveltal Cocoon in the sea after Hoppa steal that cocoon from some sealed caved. An official and fisherman from Island Country catches and bring the cocoon back to Island. Read in another Mtl. It's ok if they feel sad, after all a lot of people died and some cities were destroyed. But they just like "Wow cool" "they deserve it" "kill them all" "Yveltal is my idol" "Zygarde is good"
CodexZero:I beg your pardon? when did this happen exactly? cause I just read the entire fic and there was no part about this
SaltedEgg:Around ch 202 and ch 352. In ch 202, mc ask Zygarde to punished some poachers from "stick country" and destroy a City. In ch 352, Yveltal wakes up in "Island Country", Mc "accidentally" drop Yveltal Cocoon in the sea after Hoppa steal that cocoon from some sealed caved. An official and fisherman from Island Country catches and bring the cocoon back to Island. Read in another Mtl. It's ok if they feel sad, after all a lot of people died and some cities were destroyed. But they just like "Wow cool" "they deserve it" "kill them all" "Yveltal is my idol" "Zygarde is good"
SaltedEgg:Around ch 202 and ch 352. In ch 202, mc ask Zygarde to punished some poachers from "stick country" and destroy a City. In ch 352, Yveltal wakes up in "Island Country", Mc "accidentally" drop Yveltal Cocoon in the sea after Hoppa steal that cocoon from some sealed caved. An official and fisherman from Island Country catches and bring the cocoon back to Island. Read in another Mtl. It's ok if they feel sad, after all a lot of people died and some cities were destroyed. But they just like "Wow cool" "they deserve it" "kill them all" "Yveltal is my idol" "Zygarde is good"
the translation quality is probably very bad considering it's mtl right? but I have one question how is it compared to this translation, is it about the same or worse?
SaltedEgg:Not raw, the mtl version. You can read this ff in mtlnation
A little worse, i think this translator pick this ff from there, edit some mistake to make the translation better. The pokemon name in that mtl partially translated, just some pokemon have the right name.
CodexZero:the translation quality is probably very bad considering it's mtl right? but I have one question how is it compared to this translation, is it about the same or worse?
SaltedEgg:Around ch 202 and ch 352. In ch 202, mc ask Zygarde to punished some poachers from "stick country" and destroy a City. In ch 352, Yveltal wakes up in "Island Country", Mc "accidentally" drop Yveltal Cocoon in the sea after Hoppa steal that cocoon from some sealed caved. An official and fisherman from Island Country catches and bring the cocoon back to Island. Read in another Mtl. It's ok if they feel sad, after all a lot of people died and some cities were destroyed. But they just like "Wow cool" "they deserve it" "kill them all" "Yveltal is my idol" "Zygarde is good"