Review Detail of Abbie_OmO in munzeisei:old neohorga

Well even though I am the creator and this novel is new imma review it: It kinda lacks and intriguing protagonist, this is chapter one though, next chapter we will be introduced to the story of our protagonist, the world building is I guess nice , it needs some editing though, but I guess it ain't bad so yeah, bet the story is for the normal person is uninteresting at first and maybe it is yeah