Review Detail of Asuna0473 in Lightning in a clear sky

It is very interesting for the most part its just that I would of liked the chapter to end in a more interesting way, on the other hand there is a characters name which is a little complicated in which the name is Patroclis it sounds good because of the era in the chapter but it is still a little wired, because on my part I had to try and say it a few times to underattended but that would be about all everything else is perfect.