Review Detail of _Shades_ in NICOLE (#1 Broken) 1st Draft

I'll be honest, the story is captivating! But there are some tweaks here or there... *Just saying. No spacing in the first chapter... It made me kind of cringe when I was reading it. Honestly I wanted to drop reading it because I was uncomfortable seeing words joined together with no paragraph. And how you explained the flashback scene was kind of... Confusing? I know you're just starting out and that you've taken a big step into the world of authors. I'll definitely add this to my library to watch how you develop your writing and your backstories... I feel sorry for the she-wolf though.😭