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Interesting read, I must say. The start was slow, and its pace is still slow, but that's a good thing sometimes. We get to see his development. Though I still feel like we don't know the goal of the dragon or the MC so far. It seems more like 'I just want to get by today'. I am still interested and the writing is good. Though there are a few grammatical mistakes.

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