As the first official reader of this work while it was still in Google docs, I feel the need to be the first one to review it on this wonderful platform. Good story, albeit a little too fast paced, gets right into the action and doesn't settle for a second. A few problems with formatting but I've seen way worse so it's still readable. In any case Hope y'all enjoy this budding masterpiece and show support to author-nim. Over ad out... UwU
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