Review Detail of GoldDragonMachina in The Eternal in Twilight
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its written well. The idea is good. I just don't like how the story starts. The memory mumble jumbo, becoming flesh. The memory jumbling. It just doesn't make all too much sense to, and I don't really like it. Other than my personal story development preferences, it's good. I won't be continuing to read though.
The Eternal in Twilight
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It make sense to me having watch the movie eternals, I like how the author bring forth new perspective, especially the entanglement between Sersie & Ikaris. I just hope you won't pair him with Alice, she already has Jasper. Maybe you can introduce an OG character. Anyway, I love it and will definitely continue reading it.
RandomPasserby_07:It make sense to me having watch the movie eternals, I like how the author bring forth new perspective, especially the entanglement between Sersie & Ikaris. I just hope you won't pair him with Alice, she already has Jasper. Maybe you can introduce an OG character. Anyway, I love it and will definitely continue reading it.
Hmmm yeah, you do have a point...Howbout maybe explore an underated character in twighlight? Like Bree for example.
PsyLoRD:OG characters (as romance) take away all the magic of the FF.