Review Detail of Vassago in GOT: Bjorn The King Beyond The Wall

To start Bjorn was not the king of Norway he was the king if Sweden. The second thing that I would like to mention is how horrible it is for authors to pad their story out just so others will see them. why don't you just write ten chapters at 1k words a piece and post then at once. instead of taking places on the rankings form people that are actually trying to write stories or are doing to work on their abilities and hoping for people to give them real criticism. I am not going to be surprised if you drop this within the next week or two.