I love the idea of a hatake mc and despite it being a wish fic I was relatively fine with the wishes since they aren't ridiculously op but there's a lot of grammar errors and words spelt wrong that could be easily fixed honestly just use something like Grammerly in the future and I'll change this review
Secretchicken
Disukai oleh 3 orang
SUKASecretchicken:Hey man thanks for the feedback, as I'm writing on my phone I didn’t realize I could use Grammarly on mobile but besides that, I have fixed up the chapters! Any more suggestions are greatly appreciated!