Review Detail of Silver72 in Blazing Swordsman

Item: Blazing Swordsman
Rating: 3.6

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Silver72Lv131yrSilver72

Honestly way too much pov jumping, it's hard to keep up with and follow. The world building is decent, but other than that it is a little hard to keep up with the characters, There is a lot of story and dialogue, but there is almost no character development in the scenes, it needs a lot of work

Blazing Swordsman

Nuah_Zuah

Liked it!

SUKA

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Nuah_ZuahPenulisNuah_Zuah

I feel where you are coming from but there is no character development possible when the story has just started. yes POV jumping can get a bit frustrating but it will help in the 'character development' of the side characters later on

1yr