I really don't like when they show or introduce Mc as cold hearted and calculating but when a heroine come he becomes a dimwit And thing is even the world is fantasy fiction but for me a 10year boy talking like an adult is a huge turnoff And first his hate for goddess but for not any defined reason was also a forced situation
ClashingBlades98
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SUKAIt's not that he is of a small age, but he should look the way he behaves (looks older than his age, which is outwardly)the same " degenerate " if you are interested, look there the author very competently prescribes either "revolt of the perverted primitive" this is an example personally I like this top)
ClashingBlades98:thanks for your honest review. I will try to work on those shortcomings in my next book :)
ClashingBlades98:thanks for your honest review. I will try to work on those shortcomings in my next book :)