Review Detail of Juliet_Rose in Relive your Dream

Hi everyone. I am the writer of this novel. Please let me know your feedback. I am trying to write a story a little bit more realistic. I am a fan of those reincarnated system stories, but they add too many variables and make the MC too OP. I am not against it, but I decided not to add them to this story. This is a story about Mia, who, after reincarnating, lives her life while trying to achieve her lost dream. PS: I am adding a review because I am getting impatient. It's my first time writing.