Review Detail of Turtle034 in Gods Execution (Hiatus)

Like every other Author on this site, I am carrying on the tradition of rating my own story. I'm going to be honest, I have no idea what I'm doing with this story. It's sort of just a test run, mostly to improve my writing skills from other people reading, and yeah. That's mostly it. Don't expect much from this story, but I really hope you will enjoy it. Even if it's just junk food you enjoy while bored. The one thing I want to do the most with my writing, is for others to enjoy it, especially myself. Okay, so a bit about the actual story now. Essentially it's practically a World-Hopping/Infinity novel, but... there's a bit of a twist. I won't spoil it now, but at the end of the first world(if I ever get there), it'll be revealed. For the characters, I don't really have much of an Idea for... even for Rin. Again, this is just something I'm writing for experience. I at least hope you'll... like him. He isn't that dumb... I think. For my writing quality... hm. I think I actually have an okay grasp on punctuation and all that jazz. For updating stability... Honestly I'm surprised I've even got four chapters out in less than a week. World Background... There will be some development, and an actual reason for why Rin will be such a prodigy in using magic, but World Building is the place I struggle with the most while writing. While I love making characters and my own worlds, can't say I'm very good at it. Also, for the other world's Rin goes to in the future... I have utterly no idea.