Review Detail of ColiJiyo in Ash Earth Awakening

The Author here! I think I deserve to leave a review for myself here. This is my first book I've ever written, and I'm giving it my best here. It's quite a dream come through as I work to release this. I was almost gripped by fear and it took courage to release it. But here it is, and you won't regret reading it. I put it a lot of effort and it's fun overall to read. It might be a little slow but I promise the story does progress faster on later stage. I do get stuck on certain plotpoint as I work my way through the story but bare with me. Sometimes I do get a Fog or a bit lost on but most of this is done on tight schedule and 1st draft, so forgive me if there's some errors. But I will work on your honest review and fix what might be an error or my part. Thanks for reading and hope you enjoy :D