Review Detail of SevenSeven in My Archetype System

Shameless author review here. Hello, SevenSeven here. Before you read the book, here are some things to note: I am still an amateur writer and I often lose motivation for my works, but I will try my best. I might also post art of characters, but I am also still practicing in that department. Criticism is also appreciated. I want it to further improve my craft, so any of it is welcomed.