Review Detail of finalgetsuga in Defenders Of Time

Item: Defenders Of Time
Rating: 3.2

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finalgetsugaLv12yrfinalgetsuga

Honestly couldnt get pass chap 2 the premise and ideas are great but the writing and grammar is just terrible

Defenders Of Time

WorldChanger0

Disukai oleh 2 orang

SUKA

Balasan2

WorldChanger0PenulisWorldChanger0

Thank you so much for showing me the mistakes I made, I'll do my best to make this story better and better, question: have you read Bleach (I mean the final ark)

2yr

finalgetsugaLv1finalgetsuga

Yep ive reread bleach at least 7 times one of my favorites

WorldChanger0:Thank you so much for showing me the mistakes I made, I'll do my best to make this story better and better, question: have you read Bleach (I mean the final ark)
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2yr