Review Detail of Rin_Nurnia in In It Together Forever

Hello and an honest review from me. I can't help but had to point out this part. There are some of the end of dialogues where you used the punctuations like (.",) so I suggest it's better if you just used this (," I said.) and (." - only if there's no continuation words) But you story is really nice so keep it up👍🏻