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Review Detail of Alter_Ch in Celestial body

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This is my review of the story so far. 1. Story. It's a nice Eastern Fantasy/Xianxia/Cultivation novel. There are only 3 chapters out right now at the time of this review, but the MC's character is finely meshed out in the first and second chapter. Antagonists are there, and yes, like any other cultivation novel, they're the arrogant young master (bastard) types. (I hope the MC beats the shit out of the first guy later down the line.) 2. The World Background still isn't completely established. Only a small portion of it has been revealed which is the MC's school, but I can see this cultivation novel having a lot of promise, especially in terms of world building! 3. I'm not sure how old the MC is but I assume he's still a teenager considering how he acts from chapter 1 to 3. His power up hasn't been explained in detail and the MC doesn't understand it all too well but at the very least, he's willing to use it and not conceal himself. Hiding one's strength is cool and all, but it makes people underestimate the MC and I'm not that much of a fan of that trope. (I really loved it when the MC showed one of those condescending characters their place in chapter 3). I just hope he doesn't get arrogant from it but overall, the MC's development is pretty good. I look forward to how the MC changes down the lines. 3. Writing quality. The author's grammar and word choices are spot on. The flow of the story isn't interrupted at all which I find a plus since I want to immerse myself in the book and not have to think twice about what I just read. There are a few typos but those can easily be fixed. 4. Overall. I found the story quite entertaining though only 3 chapters have been released. I look forward to more!

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