To the author I recommend that you read this novel from the beginning and fix or add details where it is needed. I understand that this was your first novel that you have written, but it is now at 200+ chapters and the first 80’s are a slugfest. It doesn't matter if chapter 200 is good, if the beginning is boring people not feeling investing their time in this story.
Mhizta_Ray
Liked it!
SUKA