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2023-01-02 12:10

I read until chapter 220 and that was all I could stand. The translation quality and grammar is fine, but there is no plot, no world building, no character development, nothing. Everything that happens in the story is completely convenient to the plot. Like for example, he needs some super rare thing to evolve his talent, and somehow he enters a random cave and finds that exact thing. This happens over and over again. Also, the author makes ZERO effort to develop any of the characters. Its almost as if all the characters are just there to create conflict; even the love interests. The worst part to me is that every plot point is dragged on and on and is so repetitive and boring. I don’t mind the same powerscaling bs and faceslapping, but this is just the same plot but repeated five times and that happens for every conflict in the story. Would not recommend.

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