Review Detail of Jolan_Hildebrandt in Caged With A Vampire

Item: Caged With A Vampire
Rating: 3.6

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Jolan_HildebrandtLv12yrJolan_Hildebrandt

You have to set the scene better. I don't feel how evil the vampire queen is. Also you didn't clarify who she wanted to kill and why? You have the talent now try to develop it

Caged With A Vampire

Marvlyn_chi

Disukai oleh 2 orang

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Marvlyn_chiPenulisMarvlyn_chi

Thanks to your review, I actually found out what was wrong and i have adjusted it. 🤗

1yr