Very good chapter although I find that you speed up the plot a little too much at times... moreover I think it would be interesting if you deepened the moments when you show the points of view outside that of the protagonist (especially when it has a geopolitical impact) because that's what makes the charm of GOT. Moreover, it could be good for the plot that you create some difficulties for domeric because for the moment everything comes straight into his mouth without there being anything to do ^^ However, I have a question: Is the fanfic still active? (no chapter for two months)
Lorenzo5798
Liked it!
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