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I apologize if this review is bias in advance. The reason for that is although the story is darker than jojo's bizzare adventure (part4), it reminds me of Josuke Higashkata. Spoiler warning!! Basically Mc can help anyone except himself which is a really creative way to make a character strong but not overpowered because they have to earn their strength. The only con is each chapter is filled to the brim with text. I would even say 2000+ words per chapter which I strongly recommend to divide in half as most readers would either like to take a break per 1000 or 1500 words unless you have readers who like to binge novels at once. The story only has about 4 chapters as of this time so if possible and you would like to take some advice, I would recommend cutting each chapter to 1000-1500 words. Simply split the chapters and rearrange accordingly. Other than that, this is a good read.

Death World Menagerie Nightmare

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