Not really shameless author review! I'm writing this book just to challenge myself, it will not have a reeeeeally elaborate plot and it will probably have a lot of holes in the story as Dragon Ball is pretty confusing with all that alternative worlds and time loops, but at least I guarantee the grammar is good, at least better than most of the site. Anyway, just read it, if you like it, leave a review! If not, well....leave a review pointing out what I can improve!
Holo_Lover
Disukai oleh 4 orang
SUKAxlvlx:And she deserves a small pp? Nah man mc here will be nice and help krillin
Dagoth_Ur_:dont let his small body fool you because theres a shenron in his pants