I'm going to say that this book has great potential, but it has shit pacing, abrupt scene changes, and other things that needs to be rectified. The author has written a few books that while appealing to readers who have no taste, the book does poorly to entice veteran readers (like myself( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°))..... I'm not saying that I could or even can rectify these problems, because I'm not an author, and I'm not good at writing etc, bit this book can be a chance for the author to improve his writing skills.. The storyline seems to be coming along decently, the system part was abrupt as well and simply made no sense(from a background pov). I suggest that the author or editors or whatever take their time to edit the book and make sense out of it...with regards-Justhatboredguy~
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