Review Detail of bigD24 in I Stayed At Home For A Century, When I Emerged I Was Invincible

Item: I Stayed At Home For A Century, When I Emerged I Was Invincible
Rating: 4.2

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Its good, the only thing is slow development and too many verbose descriptions of things. It would be good if arthur can review and take out the unnecessary parts, the size of this novel should be 1/3 of its current chapters, then build upon the world more.

I Stayed At Home For A Century, When I Emerged I Was Invincible

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