Review Detail of Nikola_Niko in I was reborn as one of the three dragon sages in a Mystical world

Alright! Max was really fun, the first chapter was amazing but the credits you put in the middle of the chapter... that ruined tge fun and the novel’s flow. The novel is butsting with potential due to Max but if you keep doing similar things like that, quite a few people won’t bother reading more even though the story is fun! Also, even if you do have to give credits, you can do it and the end like the other things you were explaining at last. There are a few things difficult to process and understand, so i believe some proof-reading would do the novel some good! And the issue with the incomprehensible parts can’t be given a nice name as typos but the good thing is that there are only 1 or 2 of then so nothing too much to worry about! Anyways, well done author, keep working hard! [img=recommend]