Review Detail of DaoistjUbYlD in harry potter: the D clan

Item: harry potter: the D clan
Rating: 1.2

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DaoistjUbYlDLv42yrDaoistjUbYlD

Sorry man, it’s hurt to read your novel: - to much grammatical errors - your script is going too fast - since when goblins open a account without the owner present - steal the muggles money..ok but witch one (only criminals or everyone)

harry potter: the D clan

ludriel

Disukai oleh 1 orang

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ludrielPenulisludriel

Thank you for your review as i said before im not a proffesional writer so don't expect a well written story without plotholes or grammar errors.

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CountWatermelonTMLv4CountWatermelonTM

It hurts to read your comment.

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