Not a bad story, staying away from regular cliches or pulling them off well. Characters are developing smoothly and the story seems to have a thought out path. It needs an editor or a proof read though, seen some errors, things that don't read well, and some random tense changing in a few spots. Other than that, worth a read if you like Love-Triangle type stories!
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Liked it!
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