Review Detail of sinc in Memories of the Gluttonous Sage

Aight so there's enough chapters to do a review on my boi now. The first 5 chapters have been edited to match the quality of the later chapters (it is my first novel, so ye.) Chapters 6 to... 20? I don't remember the exact point, but the writing style is slightly less than the latest chapters. If you find a chapter that needs to be edited because the quality sucks, feel free to comment on it and I'll push up its editing date (i'm slowly editing the old ones as I write new chapters). Day 4 is the point where I start leaving stuff out because it'll mess with the flow. One example is the confrontation between Cain and Hunter in Day 7; there were supposed to be more scenes there and will have more scenes in the comic. Over Day 4, my writing style is refined and perfected to fit the novel style. I'd say it's about 6 to 7/10, one of my readers on another site said it was 7 to 8/10 though. The style increases in quality from Day 8 (ch. 67+) since that's when I got some advice and put it into effect. Now some bits on what to expect content wise: The mc does do a variety of experiments on people, corpses, animals, himself, basically anything he can find in the moment. The book is filled with memes and comedic moments while also balancing action and adventure here and there. In one such experiment, he creates the traditional, cliche system and gives it to someone who transmigrated (they're the easiest suspects for not questioning the existence and reason behind the system). The sole purpose of this is to study the human psych in depth by putting the subject through various situations. To the mc, knowledge is his power. The more he knows about a situation or the world, the more laidback he is. The less he knows, the more cautious he is and preparations he makes. He always tries to increase his knowledge through experiments, most of them on a whim. There isn't much tension since the mc prepares for everything and assumes/expects the worse and prepares for it. There will be some moments of tension later in the book when things happen that the mc didn't even think could happen. This book is from the mc's perspective since it is his memories, so there won't be many chapters or scenes w/o the mc. Keep in mind, the world he is in still moves and events still happen even if he isn't aware of them. This will cause some spontaneous moments to occur that the mc isn't aware of until they happen. The mc of this book doesn't dilly dally with his enemies. The only time he puts off a problem to be solved later when he has the power to do it is if it's part of an experiment that needs time to collect data/develop, the problem's outcome or existence aides one of his plans, he can use the problem to strengthen those around him, or he is curious about an aspect of the problem. The problem could be a developing situation, person, organization, country, etc. Either way, the mc will monitor it for unexpected developments and deal with it if things get too out of hand. This next bit is kind of a spoiler, but is an example of what I said above (there's nothing else below this point btw.) One of mc's enemies kills his friends, then 30 minutes later he kills their entire family off. The delay in time was to cool his anger and check to see if there were innocent members within the family (there were none btw.). The enemies was only alive in the first place because he was one of mc's experiments and he needed to be cautious of an unknown figure behind them. So ye, he doesn't waste time.