Review Detail of lapis in Sigurd In Dxd

Read 3 chapters. Writing quality - 3/5 - Kinda hard to understand the flow of conversation. There is too much of PoV change to understand what MC's thought process is. Are Issei and MC feeling same dread when talking to Tiamat? There was another scene where seeing Tiamat being touchy towards MC and Issei, the customers show displeasure, seeing which it was mentioned that 'he' felt uncomfortable, here does this also apply to MC? Character Design - 4/5 - Hard to understand motives of MC. In 1st chapter, MC wanted to just do work (to earn living) without disturbing canon, but he still continues to work in a bar filled with supernatural where people like Azazel and Odin vist. Why? Updating Stability - 4/5 - ??? World background - 4/5 - This FF has used dxd fanfic - 'Welcome to the Dragons Den' as world background and not properly edited it. Overall - 3.6/5.0 - Could be better. Please explain things like abilities of MC and his circumstances in Auxiliary Chapter.